Ode to my chocolate.
Oh chocolate Oh chocolate
chocolate is delicious
chocolate is my precious.
You're so sweet
like other treats
your so tasty
and I feel happy.
Everyone likes you
lots of people love you
you're my favorite treat
when I eat you
I feel comfortable as mat
even though I get fat
you're so delicious
you're my precious
-Ode to my chocolate.-
Eunmi,
ReplyDeleteNice ode. Those chocolates look really good! I liked that you tried to have your ode ryhme. I know it could be challenging to have the lines rhyme. What would have made your ode better was a better range of vocabulary to express your ideas better and make it more interesting.
I love godiva chocolate!!!
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